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Which Web Did He Go?

Which Web Did He Go?
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03-25-2014, 04:12 PM
Nice escape!

One nit to pick:

"His mind raced like the V12 engine of a Ferrari" - This line broke immersion for me, since I was picturing a fantasy setting.
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Which Web Did He Go? - by Taskmaster - 03-25-2014, 09:34 AM
RE: Which Web Did He Go? - by slaad11 - 03-25-2014, 04:12 PM
RE: Which Web Did He Go? - by Taskmaster - 03-25-2014, 04:32 PM

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